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Dream - My new song

Posted: Fri 15 Oct 2010, 3:15 pm
by transforce
http://www.myspace.com/transforcemusic

It's at the top of the MySpace player. Please feel free to comment. It's a demo (as are most of my tracks). I am planning on spending some time in a studio to get everything recorded properly.
It's very upbeat and I think inspirational, a song about actually getting what you set out to achieve through hard work.

Re: Dream - My new song

Posted: Sat 16 Oct 2010, 8:20 am
by Parkol
I like that, but the arrangement has to be a little louder, I think. Because the vocal is... (how to say it in English)... vocal sounds separately from the song. Tell me why sounds more finished, for me.

I like it, really!!!

Re: Dream - My new song

Posted: Sat 16 Oct 2010, 8:30 am
by transforce
Thanks Parkol. I'm hoping to get some of my songs mixed by an engineer in a studio, as although I have the technology to make the music, I struggle to get a decent vocal on the songs. I'd love to get another (proper) singer to have a go at singing one of my songs at some point too.

Re: Dream - My new song

Posted: Sat 16 Oct 2010, 8:42 am
by Parkol
transforce wrote:Thanks Parkol. I'm hoping to get some of my songs mixed by an engineer in a studio, as although I have the technology to make the music, I struggle to get a decent vocal on the songs. I'd love to get another (proper) singer to have a go at singing one of my songs at some point too.
No, your vocal sounds interesting... It's not necessary to invite someone else, just... add some reverb or... I don't know EQ vocal. A little compress, if you do it in Logic, there are a lot of things for that. The most important thing is... your music sounds unique, you have your own style.

You love Spectrasonics, as I see)))

Re: Dream - My new song

Posted: Sat 16 Oct 2010, 9:10 am
by redsock
Quite a set of lungs on ya there matey ! :mrgreen: Very good though !

I also think the mix should be more in keeping with the vocals, just to get a smoother sound.

Re: Dream - My new song

Posted: Sun 17 Oct 2010, 9:56 pm
by transforce
Thanks for the comments! Much appreciated.

Re: Dream - My new song

Posted: Tue 19 Oct 2010, 9:09 am
by AndyPSB
I had a listen last night, thought the vocals were really strong. Like Redsock and Parkol said though the track just needs mixing so the backing is a little louder.

Cheers

Andy.

Re: Dream - My new song

Posted: Thu 02 Dec 2010, 6:58 pm
by transforce
I've just uploaded an extended mix that I am really pleased with. Very much like a classic PSB 12" mix, but with even more strings.
http://www.myspace.com/transforcemusic