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New PSB cover - Here
Posted: Tue 04 Jun 2013, 9:07 pm
by transforce
Here it is.
I'm learning Logic Pro, and so did this as a test. Excuse my voice as I'm not the greatest singer. I've added a new riff and choir and I think it sounds OK.
Re: New PSB cover - Here
Posted: Tue 04 Jun 2013, 9:33 pm
by Parkol
Not bad. I had to put my mix to your song. I began to work on it, but couldn't finish.
Re: New PSB cover - Here
Posted: Tue 04 Jun 2013, 10:20 pm
by spooky
transforce wrote:Excuse my voice as I'm not the greatest singer.
at least you didn't try to sound like Neil. when doing PSB covers, i've noticed quite a few out there that actually try and sound like him(and fail). Neil has a unique voice and if someone were to do even a spot on impression, i still wouldn't like it.
Re: New PSB cover - Here
Posted: Wed 05 Jun 2013, 8:41 am
by raggatwin
Intro is too long, quite good once it gets going, outro is good.
Re: New PSB cover - Here
Posted: Wed 05 Jun 2013, 9:56 am
by Andie
I enjoyed that, your singing was fine, loved the outro

Re: New PSB cover - Here
Posted: Wed 05 Jun 2013, 10:05 pm
by Pani
That's quite nice, thanks for sharing.
Re: New PSB cover - Here
Posted: Wed 05 Jun 2013, 11:55 pm
by transforce
Thanks for the comments guys, means a lot

Parkol I'm happy to send you any files if you want to play?
I plan to do some more eventually.
Re: New PSB cover - Here
Posted: Thu 06 Jun 2013, 10:19 pm
by territorygal
Have to agree that the intro is a lil' long... otherwise, good cover, transforce!

Re: New PSB cover - Here
Posted: Sun 09 Jun 2013, 8:06 pm
by Peter1984
Sounds a little bit good.

Not bad.
Re: New PSB cover - Here
Posted: Wed 12 Jun 2013, 9:26 am
by transforce
The way through the woods (Classical mix)
Here is another attempt at a PSB track, this time Neil is doing the vocals.
Re: New PSB cover - Here
Posted: Wed 12 Jun 2013, 4:21 pm
by raggatwin
levels are all wrong mate...sorry...
Re: New PSB cover - Here
Posted: Wed 12 Jun 2013, 10:03 pm
by Parkol
It's interesting. You really need to put the vocal into music, not over the arrangement, but right into mix. You have the same things on your previous tracks. Maybe you should watch some tutorials about mastering. There are a lot on YouTube. And add the reverberation very carefully, sometimes it sounds like all instruments sounds from different corners.
Re: New PSB cover - Here
Posted: Thu 13 Jun 2013, 10:19 am
by transforce
Thanks Parkol. Yes I am watching Logic mastering tutorials at the moment. I need a producer LOL.
Re: New PSB cover - Here
Posted: Thu 13 Jun 2013, 1:10 pm
by davidlilja
transforce wrote:Thanks Parkol. Yes I am watching Logic mastering tutorials at the moment. I need a producer LOL.
Best way to learn is by trying and getting feedback... I had a hard time taking the feedback (that wasn't positive) but I soon realized that it's better to get trashed then have a bunch of people saying "great" just to be kind (never ask your mother

). That's the way to progress and getting better.
Re: New PSB cover - Here
Posted: Fri 14 Jun 2013, 8:55 pm
by transforce
Yes, nice to get an honest opinion. It's great when anyone genuinely likes something you do. I used to get the opposite too from my ex-wife who was disinterested about everything to do with my music. When I was contacted by a record company about releasing a song it was like "Oh that's nice, shall we go shopping now?" and then she never asked anything about it again until it was released, and then that was "Have WE made any money" LOL!